Undertale fanfic

Publicado: 25/12/2015 en Cuentos e historias cortas, Excusas y otras cosas

First of all, a few warnings:

1: Major spoilers ahead. Be careful

2:English is not my native language. There may be gramatical mistakes. Sorry. I decided to do it in english because i played it in english

3: In my text, sans and papyrus have their fonts. WordPress won’t allow that. I’m sorry too.



Long ago, two races ruled over earth: Humans and Monsters. One day, war broke out between the two races. After a long battle, the humans were victorious. They sealed the monsters underground with a magic spell. Many years later…

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Legends say that those who climb the mountain never return.

Frisk climbed it and fell down. Frisk was disoriented. It was something new. It was different. You KNEW it. Some ruins were in the distance and looked like somebody might be there, so you decided to walked to them.

Suddenly, a little flower sprouted from the ground. The flower had a smiling face and began talking.

-Howdey. I’m Flowey. Flowey the flower! Hmmm… You’re new to the Underground, arent’ cha?

You told Asriel to shut up. The expression on the flower’s face changed.

-What did you just called me? How do you know? Well, I suppose you’re not new to the Underground, right? I’m sure you know about the SAVE, right? Well then, what will you do this time?

You saw Toriel coming in the background. You asked her to stop. You explain to her that flowey is Asriel. She looks shocked, but gets closer to flowey and hugs it. Toriel is crying. You ask both of them to follow you to snowding. All the puzzles on the way are already solved. You don’t find anybody on your way there. Once you arrive at snowdin, everybody is there. Asgorel, Undyne, Alphys, Sans, Papyrus, Napstablook, Snowdrake… It like they already knew to gather there. You know this is not supposed to happen.

You tell everybody that flowey is Asriel. Everybody is shocked. Asgore walks slowly towards flowey. He hugs it silently. Sans looks worried. You ask him what’s wrong.

-I don’t know kiddo. It’s just that something feels… off. Like there was something missing. And at the same time, like there’s something more. It’s weird.

You tell everybody that you’ll save Asriel. That you will return him to his usual form. That he will be able to age again. But that the price will be high.

Everyone gets trapped in some sort of vines. Nothing happens. Yet. Flowey looks surprised.

-What the hell is going on? I’m actually confused.

And Frisk replied:

-Don’t you get it? You’re not in control. This isn’t what it usually is. YOU know it. That’s what you felt, Sans. This time, we’re not in control. Nobody can be. It’s all already set.

Flowey was starting to realize what was going on. It was desperate.

-YOU. YOU can stop this. Please. I don’t like where this is going.

-But you already know the answer, flowey. Don’t you. Sans already told me. Or maybe he didn’t. It’s all a bit confusing. But Sans knows that this will happen. How did you said it? “Just because you can” Or something like that.

One after another, every monster started turning into dust. All of their souls started getting together. Alphys was extremely surprised.

-This… this should not happen. Monster souls can’t exist outside of the body. How can this happen?

More and more monsters were turning into dust. One after another. Froggit. Shyren, Lesser dog, Muffet…And then, it stopped until only Toriel, Asgore, Sans, Papyrus, Undyne and Alphys remained alive.

-Why did it stopped?-Asked flowey.

-It’s a last chance. Just in case. It will continue now.

As Frisk was saying this, Alphys turned into dust. Undyne raged.


Frisk had a resignated face.

-I’m sorry Undyne, but there’s nothing I can do to stop this. If it was up to me, i’d save everybody. I already did. Probably. But i’m powerless now. Nothing can stop what’s happening. Nothing can save you. Not even your determination.

And as soon as Frisk said those words, Undyne vanished into dust. Frisk then walket to Asgore and Toriel. They knew what was going to happen.

-Goodbye, my son.

And then, dust.

Frisk approached Papyrus.

-Don’t you dare…-Said sans.

-I don’t know, brother. I think he doesn’t mean bad. Maybe we can convince him to stop what he is doing.

-I’m sorry, Papyrus. But it’s not me who you have to convince.

And then, Papyrus vanished to dust.

-Come on, Sans. Use your power. You can see further than most of the other monsters. You know what’s going on. You know I can’t stop it. I wish I could but… Don’t worry. Everything will be fine in the end.

Sans’ eye glowed bright blue, as he looked at the timeline. And he understood.

-So, it’s already decided. Hey, YOU. I hope you know what you’re doing. If you don’t, you’ll regret it.

And Sans too became dust. Now, all the monster souls were one. A tiny, white blob separated from the big mess all the monsters souls had become. It was everyone’s impression of Asriel. What every monster perceived him to be. It was not everything, but it almost was. And that part of everybody went to flowey and fused with him. His body flashed. And when the flash vanished, there he was. Asriel, as a kid again. Fully complete. Forever. But alone. Asriel started sobbing.

-Why? Why did this happen? I didn’t want anybody to be hurt. And now…

-I know. But it’s not your fault. Nor is mine. It’s YOUR fault. YOU know who you are. YOU think you can play with our lives. Well, you actually can. But think. Should you? Look at what happened because YOU wanted. Everybody died. And there’s only one way to solve this. YOU should know what to do. In the end, reality is nothing more but the addition of different perceptions of it. You can’t change your perception of our reality, but you can change ours. And we can change your. Please

Help us.



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